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2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:57浏览次数:2859
要求:
题目 盲目的崇拜(题目自拟)
说明 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words
要求
1.describe the photos briefly
2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them
3.give your point of view

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

Echoed in the cartoon is an absurd scene that a man has written “Beckham” on his face while another is spending 300 RMB just in order to have a hairstyle being similar to Beckham’s. how mad they are! As a wise man once put it “At any time be rational ” or, simply say it ,we must keep a clear mind at any time ,and should not be like two men of the cartoon is not rational .the photo have revealed a current social phenomenon that mass young people are crazily following superstars. These admirers of excessive waste almost all the time and energy to pursuit superstars. Rationally speaking, their’ s attitude to stars is not advisable. When asked about my opinion to this situation, I am to say following superstars is acceptable ,apart from being too crazy. I reckon they ought to learn more good qualities from their idols, and win their own honor like their idols through the efforts.

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