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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
Echoed in the cartoon is an absurd scene that a man has written “Beckham” on his face while another is spending 300 RMB just in order to have a hairstyle being similar to Beckham’s. how mad they are! As a wise man once put it “At any time be rational ” or, simply say it ,we must keep a clear mind at any time ,and should not be like two men of the cartoon is not rational .the photo have revealed a current social phenomenon that mass young people are crazily following superstars. These admirers of excessive waste almost all the time and energy to pursuit superstars. Rationally speaking, their’ s attitude to stars is not advisable. When asked about my opinion to this situation, I am to say following superstars is acceptable ,apart from being too crazy. I reckon they ought to learn more good qualities from their idols, and win their own honor like their idols through the efforts.