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2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:23浏览次数:1112
要求:
Teacher‟s Day :    
1. 向老师致以节日的问候。   
2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。   
3. 我如何报答老师。
用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。

用户练习作文:

teacher's day is coming soon.At first,I have best wishes for all teachers.I hope they can keep healthy and always feel happy.Every have one teacher who make a deep impression on there life.Of course so do i. There have one thing that i will never forgot.When i in middle school,I have difficult in study math.Luckily,i meet you and you give me much help.For example,when i fall in math test,i feeling very upset and you tell me don't depression ,you will make a good garde in next time if you can more careful.Moreover,you give me a warm smile which made me more confident and happy.Besides,Once i writing my homework in your home,i have a little hungry and you make a delicious food for me immeadately. Maybe you think they are little things,but that leave me deep impression.you are the best teacher for me in my heart.I think only i study hard and find a good jod can repay you.

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