采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
The Dragon Boat Festival, falling on the 5th day of the 5th according to the lunar calendar, is one of the traditional festivals with a long history. It is regarded as a day of mourning Qu Yuan, a patriotic and statesman dating back 2000 years ago, who suffered exile, so frustrated with his own country and fatuous kings, ending up committing suicide by jumping into a river. Different as the festival was, it cannot be denied that it has an ever-lasting and unique effect to arouse the public devotion to the country as a cultural heritage.99 When it comes to the Dragon Boat Festival, lots of interesting and meaningful traditional customs come up as a consequence of mourning Qu Yuan, while the customs may have changed a little for a long history. Family reunites, participating in other events to celebrate the festival. By the way, the dragon boat competition is undoubtedly the most inspiring activity in the Dragon Boat Festival, which intended to seek for the body of Qu Yuan originally. In addition, my favorite thing in the festival is rice dumplings, a delicious food consisting with rice, meat or some other filling things wrapped by bamboo leaves. There are some other traditional customs, such as dressing children up with perfume pouch and hanging the wormwood on the door. Regretfully, it is almost ignored nowadays that the Dragon Boat Festival has so profound meanings and traditional customs. The joyful memory of Dragon Boat Festival is just fading away. Therefore, it is our duty to cherish the valuable cultural heritage passed down by our ancestors and advocate its cultural and spiritual values.