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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨。
The poor are very wonderful people. One evening we went out and picked up four people from the street, one life in jeopardy. And I told the sisters: you take care of the other three, the one who I cared." So I did for her all that my love can do. I will help her to bed, see her face beautiful smile. Hold of my hand as she said just the words "thank you" and she died. I am unable to restrain the emotions look at her in front of my conscience. I asked myself if I were her, what would you say? The answer is very simple, I will tried to draw a little attention to me, I will say I am hungry, cold shivering, dying, pain, that sort of thing. But she gave me much more, she gave me her gratitude. She died with a smile on her face. So is the man whom we picked up from the drain. At that time, almost all of his body was eaten by worms, and we brought him home. "In the street, I've been living like an animal, but I'm going to die like an angel, someone to love, someone to care for." It was great. I saw his greatness. He could say that. He died like that without blaming anybody, without cursing anybody, without asking for anything. Like an angel, this is the greatness of our people. And that is why we believe what Jesus had said the words, I was hungry, my naked, I was homeless, I not to, not love nor to concern however, you have to I do all this.
