Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句;希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查。
According to the Current Population Survey,we know very well that receving education is meaningful for the youngters to have access to the good job .In some extern, the level of education desecide the unemployment rate.Therefore, if we want to enchance our competenities in the job market,we should study hard. Why we should recevice the education .There are main reasons as follow.To start with,a people with higher education level can easier to hunt job with higher pay. Secondly, only through receiving the education ,can we become a prepson with stronger ability.Thirdly,education plays an important role in our life.It is very helpful for the youngsters to broaden their eyes and increase their knowledge.Therefor, i think that the goverment should take effective measures to improve the education conditions. Of course, As a student,we should study hard in order to achive our dream.