Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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According to the Current Population Survey,we know very well that receiving education is meaningful for the youngsters to have access to the good job .To some extent, the level of education decides the unemployment rate.Therefore, if we want to enhance our competitiveness in the job market,we should study hard. Why we should receive the education .There are main reasons as follow.To start with,a person with higher education level can easier to hunt for the job with higher pay. Secondly, only through receiving the education ,can we become a person with stronger ability.Thirdly,education plays an important role in our life.It is very helpful for the youngsters to broaden their horizon and increase their knowledge.Therefore, I think that the government should take effective measures to improve the education conditions. Of course, as a student,we should study hard in order to achieve our dream.