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china have city of many beautiful.BeiJing ShangHai Guang Dong were three big city of china ,Beijing located in the north of china, ShangHai located in the middle of china ,GuangDong located in the south of china . The west of china have si chuan that are beautiful city ,china's southwest have Xi Zhang of western customs.