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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36945
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分46.0分
评语:

正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

I have a good friend named Sarah. She has a long black hair and she is very kind. She is 1.60 high ,but I am taller than her .She likes eating but does not often play sports so I am fitter than her . I like playing with her because she is a active girl and she always smiles. She also is my monitor in my class. All the teachers like her sincerely including me. I hope our friendship will be forever.

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