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I have a good friend named Sarah. She has a long black hair and she is very kind. She is 1.60 high ,but I am taller than her .She likes eating but does not often play sports so I am fitter than her . I like playing with her because she is a active girl and she always smiles. She also is my monitor in my class. All the teachers like her sincerely including me. I hope our friendship will be forever.