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丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇丰富度不足，拼写检查也要重视。
The United States has a poor boy，henry adams. He on the street the fortuitous adventure.One day,two millionaire let's make a bet,among one lost,so he must be give the million checks any one person,that one is the poor man.But,that lost manis very mean,his give a cheque to be exchanged by hanry,it,is hanry just that checks as well as to be worried.That win man help he,give he a one true million checks.A few month age,lost man bankruptcy,wingman sarcastic his"no clear end,"however,it the end of the story,the become a million man and marry the millionaire daughter
