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文中词汇表达较恰当，高级词汇表达灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Saving Money or Using Tomorrow's Money The argument over saving money or using tomorrow's money has recently been brought into focus. Quite a few deen that it is essential to save money, but others, in contrast, taking using tomorrow's money as the premier choice.Personally, it is much better to regard saving money as our lifestyle. The main reason for my iclination for saving money is that thrift is one of the Chinese traditional virtue that our Chinese people should hold. Our country is still a developing country, which has huge population. If all of us spend excessively, how can our country bear it? Futhermore, provided that tomorrow is unpredictable, it is essential for us to save money for the rainy days. There are lots of situations you may get into, like losing the job unexpectedly or some accidents happening. That may make you feel worried and stressed.Hence, it is necessary to save some money as a preparation for a secured life. Finally, money should also be kept in reserve for the retirement.This is the financial guarantee of the old life. Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that saving money for the rainy days is a much better idea.
