2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi Kelly, Would you like to visit my hometown which is in Shanghai? I was born in the 5th people hospital in Minhang of Shanghai in 1982. When I was young, there are many interesting place there. Such as the Minhang theatre, ice rink and red garden and so on. The most interesting place I liked is the Red Garden. There are many swings,slides,electrical trains in it. Also many trees, flowers, boats and so on. My mother's company was near the red garden. When my mother went to work, I would with her and sat on her bicycle. On the way, I was singing, chatting with my mommy. I miss these grateful days.