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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22883
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;文章层次较为清晰。

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It's very happy to have an opportunity to introduce you about my hometown, which is a small town in Anqing city of Anhui province. I want to tell you a story right now. That is , the biggest city called Anqing and the smallest city called Huizhou in Anhui province. When we put the names of these two cities together, it spells the word "Anhui". Is't it interesting? To the real point, I lived in my hometown for 17 years, until I entered into the university. When I was young, my hometown was surrounded by many green-trees, and a lot of rivers came out of the Changjiang-River. At that time people were poor, and our houses were also very simple, but we felt also very happy. However a lot of things have changed today. With the development of my hometown's economy, people get more richer, but the deterioration of the environment get harder too. Either fishes or trees have disappeared now. People realize the most important thing is fixing pollution and protecting the environment, otherwise our hometown is no longer our hometown.

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