加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a friend. She is a gire.She name is lili.She likes singing. She is beautiful and lovely. We always playing together. She has a long hair and brown eyes. She always help me with my daily life. She likes flowers, especially roses. She likes reading. She has a brother and a sister.she has a happy family.