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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40902
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

It is not wise that one draws a conclusion as soon as he or she sees and hears shongthing. Especially in modern time, with the rapid development of science and technology, people should be more cautious about what they see and what they hear because no one caould ensure the reality. The reasons for above are two fold. First of all, if you are not stay at the place all the time to see or hear the whole event, you could be misleaded by a moment you see or hear. Just like people can not judge what has happen only by a photo they seen. In addition, even though you see the whole event and hear the whole words, you can not believe easliy, for the reason that you don't know weather someone is cheatting you. As far as i am conaerned, you can not easily believe what you see and what you hear.

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