语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
It is not wise that one draws a conclusion as soon as he or she sees and hears something. Especially in modern times, with the rapid development of science and technology, people should be more cautious about what they see and what they hear because no one could ensure whether the scene or words are true. The reasons for the mention are twofold. First of all, if you are not staying at the place all the time to see or hear the whole event, you could be misleaded by a moment you see or hear. Just like people can not judge what has happened only by a photo they seen. In addition, even though you see the whole event and hear the whole words, you can not believe easily, for the reason that you don't know whether someone is cheating you. As far as I am concerned, you can not easily believe what you see and what you hear.
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