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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。

用户练习作文:

It is not wise that one draws a conclusion as soon as he or she sees and hears something. Especially in modern times, with the rapid development of science and technology, people should be more cautious about what they see and what they hear because no one could ensure whether the scene or words are true. The reasons for the mention are twofold. First of all, if you are not staying at the place all the time to see or hear the whole event, you could be misled by a moment you see or hear. Just like people can not judge what has happened only by a photo they seen. In addition, even though you see the whole event and hear the whole words, you can not believe easily, for the reason that you don't know whether someone is cheating you. As far as I am concerned, you can not easily believe what you see and what you hear.

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