2015年高考作文优秀范文：如何学好中文

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用。

Dear David： i saw you e-mail ,i know you be going to china,i will very happy. Beijing is a learn Chinese good place. here have many like you person. you must will be integrate into there. i will help to,don't worry .i can take you Beijing Museum， Beijing Development history pass. i expect you will come. above，welcome to china Beijing again lovely 王明