采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。
I have many good friends. They are in different place in zhejiang province, like hangzhou ,huzhou jiaxing, and so so. some of them had been aboard when we graduated from high shcool. one of my best friends is a girl ,she name is Gujianping, it is seven years for us to be friends. she is a assistant in the company we often chat about our life each other in QQ. talking shopping, buy clothes ,makeup ,and talk my son.