采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;复杂句的使用不是很丰富。
I have many good friends. They are in different places in zhejiang province, like Hangzhou ,Huzhou Jiaxing, and so so. some of them had been aboard when we graduated from high shcool. one of my best friends is a girl ,she name is Gujianping, it is seven years for us to be friends. she is a assistant in the company we often chat about our life each other in QQ. talking shopping, buy clothes ,makeup ,and talk my son.