作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear David: I saw you e-mail ,When i know you will be going to come China,I 'm very happy. Beijing is to learn the Chinese good place. Here have many like you person. you must be integrate into there. I will help to you , don't worry .I can take you Beijing Museum, Beijing Development history pass. I expect you will come. above,welcome to China Beijing again lovely 王明
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