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Saving Money or Using Tomorrow's Money When asked about whether saving money is a good habit,different students hold different views. More than haolf of them think that it is necessary to save money. However, the rest take the idea that using tomorrow's money is better. As far as I am concernedit is a good habit to save money.Here are some reasons. To begin with,saving money is a good habit in many Chinese's opinion,espically in old ones. There's one thing we need to know,China is a developing country, the ways of shopping is far from the Europeans and Americans. If we had used tomorrow's money,what should we spend tomorrow.What's more, we need realize that it is not easy for us or our parents to earn money, the savesd money can be used to pay for our college tuition. Last but not least, future is full of uncertain ,we have to save money to cope with unpredictable changes. The view of using tomorrow's money is lack of thinking and a little bit unpractical. So I prefer to save money rathan than use tomorrow's money.