文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
As a saying said "Seeing is believing " In our life ,we should learn to think a thing that we hearing from other people or madias is right or wrong .Especially ,in the Internet age,everyday we can obtain more information from the internet .But not anything is accurate.some news just attractes your eyes,in fact ,it is wrong . It looks like a man ,you can't from his apperrance konws his mind.when we see an unbelievable things,please think it in your mind ,then get your conclusion.Never thinking is a performance of foolish.
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