2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；部分句子偏简单，注意有错误的句子。

everyone wants to be successful. what is success? different people have different answers. some people think success is becoming rich, which they can buy many things they want most but now they can't afford. some people think success is coming true their dream. the dream includes: building a happy family ,their parents have a strong body. but how to be successful in our life? what we should do in order to success. first ,we should believe everyone can be successful.