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作文题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看？给出具体原因。
字数要求:300字以内。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；注意文中个别的句子错误。
More and more people move want to move out countryside and living in the big city. In my opinion have many reason lead to this result, for example, the big city have more choose to find the better job,and people can earn more money to change them life. but in my opinion i think living in a rural area is better than city, because in the big city, the pollution is serious，so it's will be influence our health,especially for the children,so i don't think living in city is good choose.
可可英语 - 划词释义
