2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

As far as we know,computer,only in several decades,surprisingly,being took advantage in a wide rang of the workplace,in addition to its fast calculation and convenience operation,has widely spread into and extremely influence public’s daily life.Then,an increasing number of people pay excessive attention to computer. Internet,as a popular tool of computer to communicate with each other,unfortunately,making people would rather stay around at home than go outside to social with,in the long run,it would set back the development of people’s communication ability in face to face.What’s more,as fast calculation and convenience operation as computer is, public felt very strongly that may be someday computer is able to think just like as a human being,and conversely control human’s thinking. However,the positive influence on computer far more outweigh the negative impact on what I mention above,therefore,we do not have to excessively worry about the rapid development of computer.