高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
It's a pleasure to introduce my hometown. I am living there from my birth until college. Qianjiang is a small city, which is in the heartland of Jianghan Plain. It is famous for freshwater crayfish and "a land flowing with milk and honey". What's more, it is the birthplace of Caoyu who is a modern dramatic writer. When I was young, my hometown is surround by green trees. The water of lake is clear so that we can see fish within lake frolic. People get along well with each other although living in poverty and basic houses. Hard labor work at the fields, was impressing in our mind. Today, however, add to that the construction of roads, parking lots, and yet more buildings, and the total lost green space can have a very real effect on a city's air temperature, air quality, and energy costs. It is imperative to manage the environment pollution , if we want to live better. Let's get moving.