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句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
When talking about what kind of life is more meaningful ,different people have different views about it .But there are many things in common about how to live a meaningful life.So as far as i m concerned,we need to make full use of every minute of our life and live it to the fullest.So i can t agree more with the remark above. In my opinion,to make life more meaningful,we need to set up a goal in our life and struggle for it all the time.As life is so short and time flies,it is really necessary to find a goal in our life.And you need to have a life goal which can encourage you during your whole life.Only when you have such a goal will you gain the motivation to do many things.Even though in the period,you may come across a lot of difficulties.But the goal will inspire you to come over them and go ahead.For example,I like English very much and i really want to learn it well.So every day I get up early to pactice my pronunciation.When others are sleeping, I am reading English in a small forest in the morning.Though sometimes I will feel a little tired but I really enjoy it because I am strugling for my dream.I find my life more colorful and meaningful for doing that. So from what I have talked above, I can safely draw this conclusion:it is quiet important for us to find a goal or a dream that can inspire us during the whole of our life.Only by strugling for it and never give up will our life be more meaningful.
