小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；简单句有点多，从句数量使用不足；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Li ming is one of my best friend.He is an outgoing guy.He have many hobbies, such as reading books,playing basketball and so on.He also is a hothearted man.He ever helped a lost grandma find her way to her house.And he always help me for my homework.In general,it's my glad to have this kind of friend.