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牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

发布时间:2013-06-07 17:05浏览次数:4557
要求:
周末你去北京野生动物园参观。请根据你所观所感,写一篇短文。
要点:
1.  有很多游客,他们给猴子喂食,和老虎玩耍。
2.  动物和人很友好,我们应该善待动物。
3.  保护环境非常重要,动物园内不要随地扔垃圾。
4.  知道了野生动物保护的重要性。因为保护动物就是保护我们自己。
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

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I went to BeiJing wildlife zoo for a visit last weekend. So great many of what I saw that I would like to put down on this paper. There were an overwhelming number of visitors in the zoo, who feed the monkey, furthermore, played with the tigers as well. It occurs to me that how harmonious the relationship between human and animal after this experience. Moreover, it is imperative for all of us to treat animal in good deed. Nevertheless, it also hardly insignificant for us to protect environment such as don't throw wastes at your will in the zoo. last but not least, the importance of protecting animal is in effect what does the same to ourselves, and it's fairly vital to be under the awareness of our human being.

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