2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；丰富的使用了长难句；请注意分段。

As the chart suggesting:people with a doctoral degree earn about 1550 weekly on average, almost three times as those with less than a high school diploma.It is obviously conveying that:the higher degree you obtain,the more money you will earn. Diverse reasons account for this phenomenon.In the first place, people with a high degree are regarded as those who have solid knowledge and broad horizon,which contribute mostly to their career.Additionally, people with a high degree,mostly have wider social relationship,which really account for higher-paid job.Last but not least, From my point of view, the more education will benefit me more, not only can improve my competition in job hunting, but can also furnish my mind, enrich my life.