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Dear John, I'd like to tell you to thank you for your inviting me, but I am so sorry to tell you I cannot go to your home have dinner with you because I am going to prepare my important exam the day after tomorrow. It is very important for me to the exam. So what I need is time. Do you mind if I have no time to have dinner with you? I believe that you aren't angry with me. It is well known that you are very kind and friend. I hope you can enjoy yourself. I cannot have dinner at your home although you must enjoy your dinner. Let's meet at next time. Can you tell me if you are free next week? It is said that the film Iron man 4 will start next week. I really want to watch this movie, and you? According to the announcement the film will be very interesting. This is my first time I want to see the film as soon as quickly. I believe the film Iron man 4 as well as Taitanic. I think it is worthwhile seeing the film. I will get 2 tickets that day if you come with me. Let's meet at the cinema if you are free. I bought a dress yesterday, but my family members said that the dress it not suits you very much. Both of my parents and my sisters are thinking the dress is very ugly. I am so sad to hear that. So I wanna give it to you as a gift. I think the dress suits you very much, and you will be very graceful if you wear it. I have a good news and bad news to share with you. The good news is that I am going to America for travelling with my family after I pass the exam. I believe I can pass it. Do you want to go to America? Coming with me if you want to go. Another is that I have to go abroad to study next year. This is the good news for my parents but it is bad for me. Not only my parents but also my teachers are supports I study abroad. I just can't help crying while I leave my family. I prefer to stay in Shanghai study rather than America. Do you have any dreams? Let me tell you my dream. I am keen on teaching. So I want to be a teacher in the future. I know that saying is a thing, doing is another. Therefore, we just do it. By the way, my birthday party will celebration next month. Can you tell me if you are available at that time. And would you like to come? Don't remember calling me when you take part in my birthday party. Hope you send me a fantastic gift. I expect to receive the particular present. Finally, the opportunity is meet between you and me.
