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SAVE MONEY There is a saying"Money is not omnipotent,but not having money is hard to live".In our daily life,money can make our life become more colourful and comfortable.In the very great degree,money is associated with our happiness,if people not for money,he will have more time to do his favourite things.But most people are the richers,they work hard to earn money.So I think whether we are richers or poorers,we should save money in our daily life. Nowdays,more and more young people are worried about their situation,because they face big employment pressure,especially in the first-tier cities, second-tier cities.Their salary is not enough for the high price of commodities.Therefore we should save money.Last summer holiday,I come to Shanghai,which is the most flourishing city in China.And the people who live in Shanghai is in a busy environment.The food is more expensive than my hometown,so I think if I study in Shanghai,I must save money. So I think we should save money.
