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In my opinion,i suppose the second way. If you like ,please pay for them.Don't wait till you don't like . Before i was a sale buyer. i always buy the clothe i very like until surpermaket has large sale. If i want to eat good food,wait or go the eating place by the time group-buy deals allow.Two things happen. One is that i doesn't get the thing i want. One is that i don't have the feeling that i very want the thing.For the first thing,the becautiful clothe without my size because i waste the time for waiting for sale,others use higer money but buy the becautiful.one is that the food i very want had sold off. FOR the second thing, the cloth or the food i want i have got,but they bacome comon thing because the time past.