加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强高级词汇的使用;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
I have a good friend.His name is Jiali Cheng.He has a short and black hair. He has two black eyes. He is good at writing,he writes essay everyday.He likes playing bascketball very much,and he often plays it with me.But his favourite hobby is reading.He reads everything .Textbook,novel,poet,essay,biography,fable and so on.He is very kind people to get along with,he ofen helps us genuinely.We all loves him very much.