作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。
A boy who played truant travelled1,600 miles.He hitchhiked to Dover,slept where only to find in boat and found himself in Calais next morning.Lorry driver left something to eat him and boy got off near Paris.but he stopped another car not taken him into Paris instead of being Perpignan.After he was pick up by policeman and sent home by authorities.