作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
A boy who played truant travelled1,600 miles.He hitchhiked to Dover,slept where only to find on the boat .He found himself in Calais next morning.Boy got something to eat lorry driver left and got off near Paris.But he stopped another car not taken him into Paris instead of being Perpignan.After he was picked up by policeman and sent home by authorities.