作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
A boy who played truant travelled1,600 miles.he hitchhiked to Dover where he slept in a boat,only to find himself in Calais the next morning.A lorry driver gave him a lift and something to eat,and the boy got off near Paris.He stopped another car but,instead of being taken to Paris,he was taken to Perpignan on the French-Spanish border.After being picked up by a policeman,he was sent home by the local authorities.