拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。
With the development of technology,it becomes easier for us to get information.But in the same way,the appearance of the information explosion makes it a question about choosing what news to read.Just as the saying goes,a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.So in my view, it is really necessary for us to select the information which we need. First of all,we need to make it clear that there is no need to obtain all the information and it s also impossible.On the one hand,there is so much information which is useless.On the other hand, we don t have so much time to do that.Secondly,we need to select from the various information according to our goals.When we are searching for the information,we need to first specify our targets and then choose the information suitable to our needs in order not be distracted by irrelevant information.Last but not least,we should know that we should never ignore the information completely as there are so much of that that you are not sure which one to choose.We should keep it in mind that receiving information is always better than getting nothing at all. So,from what I have explained above, I can safely draw this conclusion that we need to learn how to select the information which is useful and true and cater to our needs rather than get all the information or completely ignore the information.Only in this way,can we get more useful information and become a knowledgable person.