作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
A boy played truant and travelled1,600 miles.after he hitchhiked to Dover and slept in a boat,he found himself the next morning in Calais where a lorry driver gave him a lift and something to eat.on getting off near Paris, he stopped another car which not to been taken Paris but to been taken Perpignan on the French-Spanish border. There he was picked up by the policeman and sent home by the local authorities.