小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Two days later,the boy who went across the border of his country while playing truant finally returned-sick,cold and hungry.his parents were extremely worried about him these days.they had no sooner gone to meet him at the habour in the city that they got the message. They were excited and could hardly believe their eyes.his parents reactions made the boy fell ashamed of himself.. After a week’s resting, the poor boy returned to school,although he was afraid of his teachers who might punish him .the boys in the school gave him a hero’s welcome,they all admired for his unbelievable and exciting trip. and asked him so many questions.about his adventure that the headmaster soon learned this as well. So he decided to “punish”the boy in a relax way-he told him to make a speech about his experiences abroad these days to the whole school.he did so ,and acquired the warmest clap from all the teachers and students.