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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
in my opinion ,over careful with our money in daily speech not smart ,althought we as students ,should not be over shop,but too careful also an waste,such as ,we not only need speech our time to compare price ,but also pay attention to all kind of the coupons from merchants ,as far as result ,our school work was descented .which is not our eventual aim .of course,save is a goodness,but anything should be has a moderation.like eating,clean plate is a virtue ,but if our stomach can ont stand ,we just stop,was it?
