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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。
in my opinion ,over careful with our money in daily speech not smart ,althought we as students ,should not be over shop,but too serious also an waste,such as we not only need speech our time to compare price ,but also pay attention to all kinds of the coupons from merchants ,as far as result ,our school work was descented .which is not our eventual aim .of course,save is a goodness,but anything should be has a moderation.like eating,clean plate is a virtue . if our stomachs can not stand ,we just stop,was it?
