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Dear John: Thanks for you invite. I am so sorry to you and I couldn't have dinner with you this night.Please don't angry.The reason that I have a text on the day after tomorrow.So I have to study hard in order to get a great grade.It is so important to me.But I really hope you have a good time.I will call you next time. Have fun.Bye. Yours, Lihua