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Dear Director, I am a graduate of the Department of Foreign Economy and Trade.I am writing the letter for the purpose of applying for another diploma as the old one has been lost somehow. Here are the reasons why I am in desperate need of the diploma.For one thing,I am looking for a highly attractive position in a multinational company which places stress upon the academic background of its personnel.For another,an original diploma is of vital importance to any graduate because it concerns a person's future career.Finally,diploma means much to the salary and welfare in many corporations. I shall be much obliged if you are so kind as to let me have the new copy of the diploma.I look forward to your response at your earliest convenience. Yours truly, Zhang Wei
