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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6009
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。

用户练习作文:

I was graduated from Shao Guan College in 2012, and my major is chemistry. Our campus is the biggest in the north of Guangdong province so far. It is about thirty thousands square kilometers near the South Mountain. It departed into three sections. They are North section,South section,and West section. The North section is the oldest in these three districts. There are some buildings for teaching, and the rest are all dorms. The environment is clean and quilt at all times. It is a good place to learn and relax.And the South section is the newest region. There are many students' dorms and one basketball court. In the South section, more teaching building erected there. We usually have class at there in daytime and have self-learning at night. There are about forty thousands of student and five thousands of teachers and professors together. Teachers are both intelligent and kind, and students are both clever and diligent. This is my school, after my introducing, how do you think about it?

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