单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;从句使用量太少;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
My new teacher is a very beautiful woman.She has a very long ,wavy and black hair, and a pair of big eyes.She always wears a pink shirt and a blue blouses,and that looks very fashionable.She teaches us english.Sometimes she is very serious,but sometimes she makes jokes.Her class is very vivid. She is very kind to us.We all love her very mush.