单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;从句使用量太少;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
My new teacher is a very beautiful woman.She has a very long ,wavy and black hair, and a pair of big eyes.She always wears a pink shirt and a blue blouses,and that looks very fashionable.She teaches us english.Sometimes she is very serious,but sometimes she makes a joke.Her class is very vivid. She is very kind to us.We all love her very mush.