小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

My new teacher is a very beautiful woman.She has a very long ,wavy and black hair, and a pair of big eyes.She always wears a pink shirt snd a blue blouses.That looks extremely fashionable.She teaches us english.Sometimes she is very serious,but sometimes she makes a joke.Her class is very vivid. She is very kind to us.We all affect her very mush.