小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is a very beautiful woman.She has a very long ,wavy and black hair, and a pair of big eyes.She always wears a pink shirt snd a blue blouses, and that looks very fashionable.She teaches us english.Sometimes she is very serious,but sometimes she makes a joke.Her class is very vivid. She is very kind to us.We all affect her very mush.