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拼写做的很棒，高级词汇可适量增加；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。
Digital Age With the development of the technology, digital products have become more and more popular, such as telephones, computers and so on. It brings us a lot of convenience in our daily life which is following. For one hand, we can communicate with others anywhere you like which will be effective to our work and study. Once we get into troubles, we can always ask other people for help and cope with it in time. Meanwhile, we can keep in touch with our friends and families which will help us build up healthy personal relationships. What's more, we have an opportunity to shop online and buy whatever we want without going outdoor which will save a lot of time for us. For another hand, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides. It also gives rise to some negative effects. For example, we may ignore our families and friends with who we live together when we focus on using computers and telephones. Worse still, people may become lazier and unwilling to do some exercises which will do great harm to their health. So, in my opinion, we should be rational and make good use of digital products. Only in this way can we create a bright and meaningful future.
